"Oh thank god, fuck" is just perfect. I can hear that. When I saw this was Larry, I was a little dubious, but I really didn't need to worry. Great voices here - you capture all the awkwardness between them, Xander's confusion, Larry's insecurity. I love the way Xander just goes with the flow, his inner babble funny and so in character, and I adore the gruff sweetness of Larry telling Xander to shut up, attempting to clean them off, and then just pulling the covers over them so they can sleep.
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Date: 2005-07-14 01:18 pm (UTC)"Oh thank god, fuck" is just perfect. I can hear that. When I saw this was Larry, I was a little dubious, but I really didn't need to worry. Great voices here - you capture all the awkwardness between them, Xander's confusion, Larry's insecurity. I love the way Xander just goes with the flow, his inner babble funny and so in character, and I adore the gruff sweetness of Larry telling Xander to shut up, attempting to clean them off, and then just pulling the covers over them so they can sleep.
This is a gem.