Wow, in spite of my teasing, I didn't expect another chapter so soon -- thank you!
Y'know, I'm a major Xander fan, but I found myself focusing on Oz this time. Fabulous details! The blush after realizing he was naked (he's not as unflappable as I thought), the description of changing into the werewolf, then "He instinctively took a step back and Oz's head swung around to fix on him. Xander thought he might have seen sadness on that stretched face for a moment" (heartclench!), then his display of control over the beast.
And there's plot, too! Who's Alonso, and what does he want with the brown liquid?
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Date: 2004-10-18 05:07 pm (UTC)Y'know, I'm a major Xander fan, but I found myself focusing on Oz this time. Fabulous details! The blush after realizing he was naked (he's not as unflappable as I thought), the description of changing into the werewolf, then "He instinctively took a step back and Oz's head swung around to fix on him. Xander thought he might have seen sadness on that stretched face for a moment" (heartclench!), then his display of control over the beast.
And there's plot, too! Who's Alonso, and what does he want with the brown liquid?
Please, ma'am, may I have some more?