Finally got to this. I'm behind on my reading, but I'm Very glad I took the time to check this out. My emotional reaction is a sort of unsettled anticipation, which of course I want resolved, though I'm willing to wait and enjoy the scenery in the process. This is really quite lovely and the only thing I can really put my finger on is the pacing. It's Oz pacing, and it's perfect. The voices are fantastic, and that was a great kiss. Please continue, I will be watching for it.
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Date: 2004-03-17 07:05 am (UTC)This is really quite lovely and the only thing I can really put my finger on is the pacing.
It's Oz pacing, and it's perfect. The voices are fantastic, and that was a great kiss.
Please continue, I will be watching for it.