Lovely lovely. Great that Xander doesn't even get how much Willow has steered him towards this trip until this chapter -- very much in character.
That image of Oz with the halo of light worked well -- it's still in my head now.
My favorite moment? When Oz asked Xander if it was so bad being there, and Xander nodded. It's perfect -- they've known each other for so long, and despite discomfort and gaps of time, Xander responds very honestly.
And eee -- part five is up! :: dances around you ::
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Date: 2004-03-17 05:55 am (UTC)That image of Oz with the halo of light worked well -- it's still in my head now.
My favorite moment? When Oz asked Xander if it was so bad being there, and Xander nodded. It's perfect -- they've known each other for so long, and despite discomfort and gaps of time, Xander responds very honestly.
And eee -- part five is up! :: dances around you ::