ext_1720: two kittens with a heart between them (Default)
ext_1720 ([identity profile] ladycat777.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aimeelicious 2005-03-23 05:02 pm (UTC)

Why is there no me-comment? There should be a me-comment. I could've sworn I made one. Really. When I read this the first time, on monday.

Okay, or I was hallucinating. But I did read this. And meant to leave feedback. So here's attempt #2.

The sappy moment had been successfully averted, and Xander was never one to turn down a chance to taste that luscious cock.

Then, and now, I love that sentence. The humor in the first part, the tenderness in the second, so thoroughly Xander bouncing off an equally so thoroughly Spikey Spike. And the whole concept of taking a while to not forgive someone, but just to get over the shock/anger of it, forgiveness already being assured, just rang so damned true. This is lovely.

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