First off...you got all this in one morning? Damn girl.
Second... it's VERY good. I mean, makes me want to know what it's about good. Voices were great and I loved that our Xan, post season 7, is still a bit of a motor mouth.
Only thing I'd change is to have Oz's hair red simply because his hair is red in RL and I take that's whay your aiming for.
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Second... it's VERY good. I mean, makes me want to know what it's about good. Voices were great and I loved that our Xan, post season 7, is still a bit of a motor mouth.
Only thing I'd change is to have Oz's hair red simply because his hair is red in RL and I take that's whay your aiming for.
Please give us a 2nd bit okay?