Finally got to this. I'm behind on my reading, but I'm Very glad I took the time to check this out. My emotional reaction is a sort of unsettled anticipation, which of course I want resolved, though I'm willing to wait and enjoy the scenery in the process.
This is really quite lovely and the only thing I can really put my finger on is the pacing.
It's Oz pacing, and it's perfect. The voices are fantastic, and that was a great kiss.
Please continue, I will be watching for it.